“If you can’t explain it to a six-year-old, you don’t understand it yourself.” – Albert Einstein. Verbosity is not the key, but neither is simple, dumb writing. Your voice needs to read easily, but influence and convey the meaning. But not in every detail, as you need to let the reader’s own mind fill in the blanks and imagine the situation, scenario, characters, and location you are putting before them. The more the reader imagines your story rather than deciphers your meanings, the more they are drawn into your story.
Andrew Sharp Fantasy Author 